privacy: Final review

text/preliminaries/privacy.tex

@@ -5,7 +5,11 @@
 \label{subsec:prv-info-dscl}
 
 When personal data are publicly released, either as microdata or statistical data, individuals' privacy can be compromised, i.e,~an adversary becomes certain about an individual's \emph{sensitive attribute}, i.e.,~personal information, with a probability higher than a desired threshold.
-In the literature, this compromise\kat{do you want to say 'peril', 'risk' instead of compromise ?} is known as \emph{information disclosure} and is usually categorized as (\cite{li2007t, wang2010privacy, narayanan2008robust}):
+In the literature, this incident
+% compromise
+% \kat{do you want to say 'peril', 'risk' instead of compromise ?}
+% \mk{No, it's more about the result, i.e., compromising privacy, rather than the risk.}
+is known as \emph{information disclosure} and is usually categorized as (\cite{li2007t, wang2010privacy, narayanan2008robust}):
 
 \begin{itemize}
   \item \emph{Presence disclosure}---the participation or absence of an individual in a data set is revealed.