From 9de111df1fe45f692d27f230c4ab9bd4876dbf49 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Manos Katsomallos <manos@delkappa.com>
Date: Mon, 6 Sep 2021 00:44:33 +0300
Subject: [PATCH] privacy: Final review

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 text/preliminaries/privacy.tex | 6 +++++-
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 \label{subsec:prv-info-dscl}
 
 When personal data are publicly released, either as microdata or statistical data, individuals' privacy can be compromised, i.e,~an adversary becomes certain about an individual's \emph{sensitive attribute}, i.e.,~personal information, with a probability higher than a desired threshold.
-In the literature, this compromise\kat{do you want to say 'peril', 'risk' instead of compromise ?} is known as \emph{information disclosure} and is usually categorized as (\cite{li2007t, wang2010privacy, narayanan2008robust}):
+In the literature, this incident
+% compromise
+% \kat{do you want to say 'peril', 'risk' instead of compromise ?}
+% \mk{No, it's more about the result, i.e., compromising privacy, rather than the risk.}
+is known as \emph{information disclosure} and is usually categorized as (\cite{li2007t, wang2010privacy, narayanan2008robust}):
 
 \begin{itemize}
   \item \emph{Presence disclosure}---the participation or absence of an individual in a data set is revealed.