intro of chapter 4

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@@ -4,17 +4,18 @@
 % Crowdsensing applications
 The plethora of sensors currently embedded in personal devices and other infrastructures have paved the way for the development of numerous \emph{crowdsensing services} (e.g.,~Ring~\cite{ring}, TousAntiCovid~\cite{tousanticovid}, Waze~\cite{waze}, etc.) based on the collected personal, and usually geotagged and timestamped data.
 % Continuously user-generated data
-User--service interactions gather personal event-like data, that are data items comprised of pairs of an identifying attribute of an individual and the---possibly sensitive---information at a timestamp (including contextual information), e.g.,~(\emph{`Bob', `dining', `Canal Saint-Martin', $17{:}00$}).
+User--service interactions gather personal event-like data that are data items comprised by pairs of an identifying attribute of an individual and the---possibly sensitive---information at a timestamp (including contextual information), e.g.,~(\emph{`Bob', `dining', `Canal Saint-Martin', $17{:}00$}).
-When the interactions are performed in a continuous manner, we obtain ~\emph{time series} of events.
+%For a reminder, when the interactions are performed in a continuous manner, we obtain time series of events.
 % Observation/interaction duration
-Depending on the duration, we distinguish the interaction/observation into \emph{finite}, when taking place during a predefined time interval, and \emph{infinite}, when taking place in an uninterrupted fashion.
+%Depending on the duration, we distinguish the interaction/observation into finite, when taking place during a predefined time interval, and infinite, when taking place in an uninterrupted fashion.
 Example~\ref{ex:scenario} shows the result of user--LBS interaction while retrieving location-based information or reporting user-state at various locations.
  
 \begin{example}
   \label{ex:scenario}
 
   Consider a finite sequence of spatiotemporal data generated by Bob during an interval of $8$ timestamps, as shown in Figure~\ref{fig:scenario}.
-  Events in a shade correspond to privacy-sensitive events that Bob has defined beforehand. For instance his home is around {\'E}lys{\'e}e, his workplace is around the Louvre, and his hangout is around Canal Saint-Martin.
+  Events in a shade correspond to privacy-sensitive 
+  \kat{You should not say that only significant events are privacy sensitive, because then why put noise to the normal timestamps? Maybe say directly significant for the shaded events?} events that Bob has defined beforehand. For instance, $p_1$ and $p_8$ are significant because he was at his home, which is around {\'E}lys{\'e}e, at $p_3$ he was at his workplace around the Louvre, and at $p_5$ he was at his hangout around Canal Saint-Martin.
 
   \begin{figure}[htp]
     \centering
@@ -35,10 +36,11 @@ A widely recognized tool that introduces probabilistic randomness to the origina
 Due to its \emph{composition} property, i.e.,~the combination of differentially private outputs satisfies differential privacy as well, differential privacy is suitable for privacy-preserving time series publishing.
 \emph{Event}, \emph{user}~\cite{dwork2010differential, dwork2010pan}, and \emph{$w$-event}~\cite{kellaris2014differentially} comprise the possible levels of privacy protection.
 Event-level limits the privacy protection to \emph{any single event}, user-level protects \emph{all the events} of any user, and $w$-event provides privacy protection to \emph{any sequence of $w$ events}.
+\kat{Please write another introduction for your chapter, that is in connection to your thesis, not the paper.. all this information in this paragraph must be said in the introduction of the thesis, not of the chapter.. }
 
-In this chapter, we propose a novel configurable privacy scheme, \emph{\thething} privacy, which takes into account significant events (\emph{\thethings}) in the time series and allocates the available privacy budget accordingly.
+In this chapter, we propose a novel configurable privacy scheme, \emph{\thething} privacy (Section~\ref{sec:thething}), which takes into account significant events (\emph{\thethings}) in the time series and allocates the available privacy budget accordingly.
 We propose three privacy models that guarantee {\thething} privacy.
-To further enhance our privacy method, and protect the {\thethings} position in the time series, we propose techniques to perturb the initial {\thethings} set (Section~\ref{sec:theotherthing}).
+To further enhance our privacy method, and protect the {\thethings} position in the time series, we propose techniques to perturb the initial {\thethings} set (Section~\ref{sec:theotherthing}).\kat{this is the content that you must enrich and motivate more in the intro of this chapter}
 
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 \input{problem/theotherthing/main}